mattmitchell-737's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Who]

Good stuff...

Even though your graphics aren't the best I still loved it. Great job animating how ticked off the duck got, that was pretty funny stuff.

LocalNeroflash responds:

XD
thx mr.mattmitchell_737

[Lost And Forgotten]

Chrono isn't the only one lost...

Your story completely lost me. You really need to work on writing a story that doesn't jump around and become inconsistent. Also you need to work on the dialogue. What would a person in this situation really say or do. If I woke up on a mysterious island I wouldn't say, "Well I better go look around cuz I might be here a while." I would most likely wake up and then look around for a while and then say to myself, "where am I?" If you can get your story together and get some good dialogue you will have a great flash. Until then it will just be a well animated sprite with no sense of direction and somewhat boring. I gave you a 3/5.

Spriter responds:

As I said, the story is somewhat vague as of now. It'll all clear up next episode. I thank you for the constructive review :)

[Fuzzy Math]

I have seen better flashes against bush

This one had plain sucky ass graphics. Anyone who doesn't agree is just lying to themselves. It was funny during certain points, but why did you make a song out of it. Would have been much better if you had him making a speech saying stupid things then showing the audience responding.

[The Takamori Legend]

Let me just say something...

Anyone who doesn't give this a 5/5 is a completely retarded jackass. I really can't see why you are making this for a site like newgrounds when you have that kind of talent. You seriously need to send this to anime companies.

With the right program, your tiny flaws(like the blood) would disappear. Don't even listen to retards like the guy who reviewed before me. He probably is some 10 year old kid who doesn't know how to draw more that circles in paint. Keep up the great work.

[bad cook]

Good first try...

I would say work on the following:

First- Write a story line that is either funny or dark, that seems to be what people like on newgrounds. Make some charactors and give them personalities.
Second- Throw in some great music, I have always liked the use of rock instrumental.
Third- Keep up the good work, if that is really your first flash you have great potential.

[halo dancing baby]

Great

Great animation and good for a laugh.

[A World Of Crap]

Thats just sick

I see that you are trying to get a point across. But come on man, that guy was swimming in shit. I mean seriously, I don't care how good of a friend you have, they won't help you if you walk on a huge pile of shit and sink in. Thats disturbing, I think I am gonna go take a crap now you sicko.

[?!?! What If !?!?]

Stoner ville flash

Man, you are truly a stoner to make this sort of movie. For some reason a time machine is used to go back in time. For what reason though ... To watch weed grow. That is truly retarded, but pretty original somehow I guess.

I would give you an "E" for effort, but you would just buy more pot with it.

wynand responds:

lol thanx for the review, lol the time machine rips the universe and it has to start over lol, thanx tho i didn't see it from that prespective, stil working on my story telling ability 5years after this review lol
You'd be glad to know i quit lol